Alan’s mother died.
Lara walks her daughter, Lucy, to class on the first day of kindergarten.
Sharon and Scott celebrate their 50th wedding anniversary.
Events of our lives trigger human emotions.
They are the stuff stories are made of, and it is up to authors to use the right words, phrases, descriptions so that our readers will experience these events with all of the emotion as if they were right there, encountering them firsthand.
Authors do this in many different ways:
- By providing appropriate settings- Perhaps using darker lighting, wind/rain, eerie sounds in instances of sadness such as death, defeat/loss of some sort, suspense, and so on. Light, sunshine, puffy clouds, a gentle breeze for scenes of romance, birth, success, etc.
- By providing appropriate sounds- Such as laughter, wind chimes, birds singing for happier scenes; screams, heavy breathing, howling for more suspenseful ones.
- By providing describing appropriate ‘touch’- Gripping, pounding, scraping are more emotionally charged for suspense; soft touch, patting, tender reassurances for more restful scenes.
- By using certain colors- Light pastels are more restful; red, orange, black are often used for scenes with more action… tenseness.
5. Other things that can be varied, depending upon the purpose of a scene are: smell, facial expression, voice, vocabulary, description of the characters’ bodies (tense shoulders…) Even teeth—and especially eye descriptions—add add to the overall emotional feelings of each scene.
Emotions are all about the senses, so everything you would feel, see, hear—and the resulting tastes/sounds/smells (and I’m not talking about popcorn) on a movie screen is fair game for authors.
A quickened pulse or heartbeat… a churning stomach…
A good book to get you started toward creating an emotional journey for your reader is: The Emotion Thesaurus by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi.